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the bird at the top of the stairs
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10-28-2004, 02:27 PM
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K-Wise
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Location: In a pool of mayonnaise!!
Great use of imagery here.
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The bird lies still at the peak
I pick her up
Red under thundercloud feathers
I really like that line. Keep posting and I'll keep reading. Be sure to reply to other peoples work and share the love.
Asta!!
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