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That was beautiful. I personally don't write peoms that rhyme, but this is perfect. It is something that no matter who reads it, where they are, or how they are feeling that they have to feel at least some hope. I am a firm believer that there should always be hope and that is what your writing seems to mean to me.
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Cain: I know what you're doing. I've lead troops into battle before.
DG: And, how am I doing?
Cain: Well, there's less *hugging* when I do it
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