pez252

The story started ok but went from getting to know eachother through to falling apart in one line.... That is not a sign of good writing and it took away from any point that was atempted.

oh and i notices a lot of people were asking if it was a made up story or a fake... of course it is. I suppose at some point in the world something like this did happen, but that does not make it true. It was written by someone for some reason. I think it was written because the author was bitter and felt like by writing a story about how there is someone in the world for you and not to miss out on it, it would some how give them hope that they would find that someone.