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Old 04-24-2004, 03:48 AM   #2 (permalink)
vonstalhein
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I liked the idea, but some ofthe rhymes were a little tenuous; 'There are the riches, indulgence and fame
And over that hill is a promise that’s lame' for example. But overall, a nice job. I particularly liked the first 4 stanzas.
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