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Old 04-14-2004, 07:40 PM   #21 (permalink)
analog
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Since i'm just cruising through and don't know shit about this type of thing, I'll add the following based on my own specialty (writing, english language):

"enquire" is an acceptable spelling variant of "inquire", but it would likely look more professional and not risk confusing people to spell it the common way, inquire. Just a thought- it looks great, btw!

EDIT: Re-read your page's content- you have a few major punctuation errors (periods instead of question marks). Also, the wording is messed up in a few sentences, like you wrote it and then edited a portion without changing it to account for difference in tense, or words seem to be left out. If you can, run the text through a grammar checker.

If none of this matters to you, then nevermind. Just being helpful.

Last edited by analog; 04-14-2004 at 07:46 PM..
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