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I myself almost never use punctuation in poetry. If the words themself ring true, it really isn't needed. I like this one. The meaning is pretty clear cut, and it flows nicely. If this was your first, keep at it!
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Bad spellers of the world untie!!!
I am the one you warned me of
I seem to have misplaced the bullet with your name on it, but I have a whole box addressed to occupant.
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