the time looks better not off on the side beneath the i in miami as before you had it before.
although i wonder why the rest of that type is brown & italic while the time is black & non-italic...
the open & off stand out better in the red.
losing that boat & wave bit in the top right corner is a good move.
has this gone to print yet?
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