i had thought that you said that sometimes the lyrics inspire you to write poetry and you'll start poetry out from a lyric of a song, which is different from mixing a few songs together and changing some of the wording or phrases to songs. I didn't say it wasn't bad or anything. I like it, it just sounds more like Evanescence than you. The second piece to me seems much more original. Hence why I like it more than the first.
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Cain: I know what you're doing. I've lead troops into battle before.
DG: And, how am I doing?
Cain: Well, there's less *hugging* when I do it
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