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Old 05-22-2005, 04:39 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Photos since my last post

Just some shot's i've been taking in and around my house since I've last showed my face. Hope you like em, tell me what you think.













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Old 05-22-2005, 10:49 AM   #2 (permalink)
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GOOD TEXTURE/COLOR BALANCE........NICE WORK! XOXOXOO
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Old 05-22-2005, 11:24 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Good eye!

Creative and well done.
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Old 05-24-2005, 09:20 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Wonderful work, great composition!

You've given me some great ideas!
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Old 05-24-2005, 10:15 AM   #5 (permalink)
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They're all really great Shpoop! The last one really does it for me.

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Old 05-24-2005, 11:37 AM   #6 (permalink)
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I love them.
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Old 05-24-2005, 12:02 PM   #7 (permalink)
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I like what I'm seeing. You've got both an eye for composition and also what you need on the techinal part.

As for some constructive critisism (from a lesser photographer, but some personal opinions none the less):

There's something "wrong" in the picture with the dog in it. The idea is a good one, but there is something there that doesn't feel right. Maybe it's the depth in the picture, or since the dog is black it seems almost underexposed. The picture is almost taken at a funny angle wich makes you a bit too conscious of the photographer.

And the three in the sunset seemed a bit too ordinary for my taste. Seen quite a few of those, so even if you're photo was a good in everyway it still didn't catch my eye.

The first one is my definite favourite!

Anyways: I would also like to hear what people think about posting critisism about other peoples work in here? I for one would like something more than praise when I post here, but I don't know how other people would fell about it. If the general consensus here is that one should shut up if one doesn't like it, I'll comply with the majoritys wish.
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Old 05-24-2005, 04:58 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Those are not only well-taken, but beautiful and awe-inspiring.

You gave me a new appreciation for everyday things, and for that, I thank you.
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Old 05-24-2005, 05:11 PM   #9 (permalink)
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These are stunning. I especially love with the last shot. I'm not sure as to why the lightbulb is in the tree, but it looks beautiful anyway.

Your eye for colour and texture is supurb.
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Old 05-24-2005, 08:30 PM   #10 (permalink)
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I don't know anything about art criticism, but I liked every one of those, the fly on the leaf the best.
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Old 05-25-2005, 03:36 PM   #11 (permalink)
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Loved them all. What camera did you use?
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Old 05-25-2005, 11:20 PM   #12 (permalink)
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I for one VALUE crits. Makes you better. You can never appeal to EVERYONE but there are always tips. They help you figure out what you may be able to do better.

The flower and the fence is my favorite. The last one I really don't know what to think. The umbrella is great. Great composition in all.

Cheers!
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Old 05-25-2005, 11:42 PM   #13 (permalink)
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Excellent use of contrasting framing, it really creates a good atmosphere. The shots themselves are amazing.
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Old 05-26-2005, 07:04 AM   #14 (permalink)
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wow, just wow. the colors in the pictures are amazing. i really like the lightbulb in the tree. where did you come up with the idea for that one?
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Old 05-26-2005, 09:45 AM   #15 (permalink)
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its actually not a lightbulb, its a little hokey solar engine...i always thought it would make a good picture if i could find out how to use it...so i just walked around taking pictures of it in weird locations, adn that turned out to be my favorite.
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Old 05-27-2005, 10:23 PM   #16 (permalink)
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The second to last one was my favorite picture. I don't know why, but there was something about that picture that was visually pleasing to me.
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Old 05-28-2005, 09:19 AM   #17 (permalink)
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I second Desario. I've always liked the slightly surreal effect of that kind of tree. That's near your house? What part of the country?
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