Want to have strange dreams and/or nightmares/paranoia? Read this very creepy story - Tilted Forum Project Discussion Community

Nefir · 12-25-2003, 08:58 PM

Ok this is fiction, but its extremely well written, and has just the right dose of creepiness in it to give you chills down your spine.

Mor importantly, however, it makes you think.. it brings up questions about reality, mind, and existance as we know it. It does a great job at getting those paranoid thoughts to the surface.

Do you think you can handle it? Its quite long, but very very worth it. Check it out.

http://www.pointlesswasteoftime.com/jdate/intro.html

And when you are done reading, pick up your jaw off the ground, and post your thoughts about what you've read.

nash · 12-26-2003, 01:31 AM

How many pages [is] it? I want to finish it but I'm getting sleepy. It doesn't seem too creepy, just weird.

SVT01Cobra · 12-26-2003, 01:38 AM

So long... so tired...

Had I known I was going to read a novel I would have saved it for later... good read though.

NbCal · 12-26-2003, 05:04 PM

I jumped to the end and it is 16 pages, guess I will start reading it now...

Nefir · 12-26-2003, 05:17 PM

For me the read was absolutely worth it... Hopefully the length doesn't discourage too many people. It really grabs you the collar quite soon into the tale, and won't let go...

Crack · 12-26-2003, 11:16 PM

it was a pretty good story, but the ending could have been done better... good read!
"This is what HP Lovecraft would have written, had he been born without any writing talent and with some kind of weird cock obsession."

-literary critic Howard Worthington
~Crack

GoldenOuroboros · 12-28-2003, 02:25 PM

LOL.. this should be good.. I'm chuckling at the first few paragraphs already

EDIT: That was pretty awesome.. sucked me right into it. Didn't stop reading till the end.. But all in all.. very strange

SVT01Cobra · 12-28-2003, 06:16 PM

So, lets all try to figure out where Todd REALLY was.

papermachesatan · 12-28-2003, 09:55 PM

Very interesting story. It lost steam on the creep factor towards the ending though. Posted the link to it on two other message boards, as requested by the author.

Fallen · 12-29-2003, 07:25 PM

Great read.

I really enjoyed it. You're right though. It did lose some of the "creep out" factor towards the end. Still, it was a really good story.

StormBerlin · 01-01-2004, 10:45 PM

it started out good. the ending was kinda blah. good three hour read tho.

taliendo · 01-02-2004, 04:54 AM

Well, that was bizarre. And now its 8 am and I need to go to bed.

Eviltree · 01-03-2004, 09:20 PM

After reading their little 'disclamer' I'm not sure I really want to be reading this. Tell me, is all that warning just to 'set the mood'? Or is he actually serious about that?

Stiltzkin · 01-05-2004, 11:22 PM

Guess what? Page 10 isn't the last page, even though it claims to be. Just change the URL http://www.pointlesswasteoftime.com/jdate/11.html
and keep going!

EDIT: ... or just scroll down a bit. Heh, okay.

Sho Nuff · 01-08-2004, 07:18 AM

I read up to "the end" Good stuff. Better than most of the crap hollywood shovels out these days.

12-25-2003, 08:58 PM	#1 (permalink)
Nefir Junkie Location: Louisville, KY	Want to have strange dreams and/or nightmares/paranoia? Read this very creepy story Ok this is fiction, but its extremely well written, and has just the right dose of creepiness in it to give you chills down your spine. Mor importantly, however, it makes you think.. it brings up questions about reality, mind, and existance as we know it. It does a great job at getting those paranoid thoughts to the surface. Do you think you can handle it? Its quite long, but very very worth it. Check it out. http://www.pointlesswasteoftime.com/jdate/intro.html And when you are done reading, pick up your jaw off the ground, and post your thoughts about what you've read. __________________ You do not use a Macintosh, instead you use a Tandy Kompressor break your glowstick, Kompressor eat your candy Kompressor open jaws, Kompressor release ants Kompressor watch you scream, Because Kompressor does not dance

12-26-2003, 05:17 PM	#5 (permalink)
Nefir Junkie Location: Louisville, KY	For me the read was absolutely worth it... Hopefully the length doesn't discourage too many people. It really grabs you the collar quite soon into the tale, and won't let go... __________________ You do not use a Macintosh, instead you use a Tandy Kompressor break your glowstick, Kompressor eat your candy Kompressor open jaws, Kompressor release ants Kompressor watch you scream, Because Kompressor does not dance

12-26-2003, 11:16 PM	#6 (permalink)
Crack Misanthropic Location: Ohio! yay!	it was a pretty good story, but the ending could have been done better... good read! "This is what HP Lovecraft would have written, had he been born without any writing talent and with some kind of weird cock obsession." -literary critic Howard Worthington ~Crack __________________ Crack, you and I are long overdue for a vicious bout of mansex. ~Halx

12-28-2003, 02:25 PM	#7 (permalink)
GoldenOuroboros The Cheshire Grin... Location: An Aussie Outback	LOL.. this should be good.. I'm chuckling at the first few paragraphs already EDIT: That was pretty awesome.. sucked me right into it. Didn't stop reading till the end.. But all in all.. very strange __________________ Can you see me grin grin grrriiiiinnnning?! Last edited by GoldenOuroboros; 12-28-2003 at 07:53 PM..

12-29-2003, 07:25 PM	#10 (permalink)
Fallen Crazy Location: Adrift In Madness	Great read. I really enjoyed it. You're right though. It did lose some of the "creep out" factor towards the end. Still, it was a really good story. __________________ Overdosed on Apathy

12-26-2003, 01:31 AM	#2 (permalink)
nash Psycho	How many pages [is] it? I want to finish it but I'm getting sleepy. It doesn't seem too creepy, just weird.

12-26-2003, 01:38 AM	#3 (permalink)
SVT01Cobra Psycho Location: Somewhere, Missouri	So long... so tired... Had I known I was going to read a novel I would have saved it for later... good read though.

12-26-2003, 05:04 PM	#4 (permalink)
NbCal Tilted Location: Newport Beach, CA	I jumped to the end and it is 16 pages, guess I will start reading it now...

12-28-2003, 06:16 PM	#8 (permalink)
SVT01Cobra Psycho Location: Somewhere, Missouri	So, lets all try to figure out where Todd REALLY was.

12-28-2003, 09:55 PM	#9 (permalink)
papermachesatan Psycho Location: Texas	Very interesting story. It lost steam on the creep factor towards the ending though. Posted the link to it on two other message boards, as requested by the author.

01-01-2004, 10:45 PM	#11 (permalink)
StormBerlin Happy as a hippo Location: Southern California	it started out good. the ending was kinda blah. good three hour read tho. __________________ "if anal sex could get a girl pregnant i'd be tits deep in child support" Arcane

01-02-2004, 04:54 AM	#12 (permalink)
taliendo Insane Location: an indelible crawl through the gutters	Well, that was bizarre. And now its 8 am and I need to go to bed. __________________ -LIFE IS ABSURD-

01-03-2004, 09:20 PM	#13 (permalink)
Eviltree Psycho Location: British Columbia	After reading their little 'disclamer' I'm not sure I really want to be reading this. Tell me, is all that warning just to 'set the mood'? Or is he actually serious about that?

01-05-2004, 11:22 PM	#14 (permalink)
Stiltzkin Junkie	Guess what? Page 10 isn't the last page, even though it claims to be. Just change the URL http://www.pointlesswasteoftime.com/jdate/11.html and keep going! EDIT: ... or just scroll down a bit. Heh, okay. Last edited by Stiltzkin; 01-06-2004 at 06:08 PM..

01-08-2004, 07:18 AM	#15 (permalink)
Sho Nuff Addict Location: Harlem	I read up to "the end" Good stuff. Better than most of the crap hollywood shovels out these days. __________________ I know Nietzsche doesnt rhyme with peachy, but you sound like a pretentious prick when you correct me.