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Serpent
serpentine lashes placed below the brow
shaving away life from the eternal flow of the evolutionary mind bound behind the eye its tail spins and flickers raising its toungue to guard away dust and tears a circling fan of iris and bloody blue boiling within a glass contaner capsized; the negotiating eye never aroused only dazed to utter levels of confusion and latency crowds are parted by the wind that is spread by the movement of hand and scale a deep carving of talons that rake accross the only pure thoughts that can be found lingering upon your face when the dragon awakes emotion becomes enslaved raging buckets of sweat diing into pores of whispered promises we are now hardened. let the serpent dance. |
I really liked the continuing metaphor of an argument being a snake, and the depth of you describing it from beginning to end.
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Thanks a lot X3no
i'm glad you were able to make something out of it. |
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You should post more, I really like your work. |
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