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Writing Challenge # 24
It's another week yet again ... Hope you all are ready!
Your Challenge: Write using any form you choose, with DARKNESS as your theme Enjoy digging for the words this week... |
Black this husk shows clear
midnight embers I hold dear colored by unending fear beads of tar become my tear darkness wraps around my soul using pitch to fill this hole perhaps regaining some control over a heart thats made of coal shadow viels my tarnished eyes a velvet blanket muffles cries and nothing heard as nature tries before my ears the birdsong dies Please take this Darkness I dispise |
An inpenentrable vault of thought and emotion
Where sunlight sometimes came to play Darkness resides and takes the toys The view my eyes take from a window Only verifies the view behind them It's raining on the earth It's storming in my mind |
On the other hand....
My rock
My savior The match that lights my soul's fire My friend My lover The spark that brightens the corners of thought My god My joy I bless the darkness that sometimes overcomes me Without it, would your light shine so bright? Without it, all that I am Could not love all that you are |
Drip
I've left these alone for a while. Forgive me if I'm rustier than ever.
----- Drip. Clothes rustle in the background. A thick cloth covers my eyes as I lay back on a table. My hands tied down. Drip. Breathing is an easily distinguishable sound, as everybody in the room (Three? Ten? Twenty? Thirty?) seems to breathe in unison. Drip. The only other sound that's clear is that singular, miniscule splash as a drop hits above my stomach. But more important than the sound is the feeling. Fire spreads from my solar plexus, radiating outward toward my fingers and toes. Drip. Words are muttered around me, echoing heavily, though the originals are as indistinguishable from the echoes as the words themselves are. Drip. The fire is less intense now... or maybe my mind can't handle the pain and is just numbing my body to it. God only knows now. All this pain... all this suffering. I don't know that I even believe in God now... Drip. Somebody's removing the cloth over my eyes. I squint to prepare for onslaught of light... which doesn't come. The room is as dark as the blindfold was. The whispers are still there, still unintelligible, but somehow more insistant. Drip. The lights come up as slowly as the dawn. My neck is stiff. Whether from disuse or something else, I don't know. I strain to raise my neck, to look down at my body, to calm this urge to see my solar plexus, to forget about the voices surrounding me and find the source of these pops of fire. Drip. I will myself to raise my head at least as much as I physically push myself to, crying in exertion, taking an eternity to reach my goal. Drip. And I see.... nothing. No table, no body, no pool of liquid, no fire, no people.... nothing. Only darkness in spite of the light. Drip. Drip. Drip. |
the eyes to inside my soul
vision blurred so unseen lies murky depths of broken dreams piercing daggers driving home begun anew rivers run of blood wetness drips to drain this form empty becomes this shell of soul as shadow now consumes me whole |
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