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the leap from me to you
You see me
I see you You judge me I’ll judge you You don’t know me I don’t know you Stereotype me Stereotype you You tell me I’m hellbound I’ll call you hypocrite Tell me the road that you’ve found I’ll say your full of shit You point at my tattooed flesh I’ll laugh at your suit and tie You say I’m a fucked up mess I’ll say your living a lie *********************** It might not be that different The leap from me to you Neither one will take the time To find out if it’s true |
From the work you've posted so far I can tell you have a definite style in your writing. A pretty simple style, but fairly straight forward.
Good work. |
I like it! It almost seems more like a song.
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it is a song. and thanks.
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