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Dorian_S · 05-16-2003, 11:08 PM

cling to that cigarette
shake like a homeless man

nearly eighteen and this is your province
when you're old you'll feel at home

look back to your seventeenth
can't remember, can you?
all your aging gets you nothing but bored
it's all the same, all the same

stop shaking
stand up
stand up
stand up

you couldn't be somebody else
you didn't spend your second grade
whittling pencils into statues

you didn't start feeling until it was too late for you

old at five and still i'm aging

-D.S.

J.R.V.A. · 05-18-2003, 05:42 AM

Nice work. I'm glad I didnt start feeling before it was too late. Age is a state of mind I think. Thanks for sharing

05-16-2003, 11:08 PM	#1 (permalink)
Dorian_S Upright	Aging cling to that cigarette shake like a homeless man nearly eighteen and this is your province when you're old you'll feel at home look back to your seventeenth can't remember, can you? all your aging gets you nothing but bored it's all the same, all the same stop shaking stand up stand up stand up you couldn't be somebody else you didn't spend your second grade whittling pencils into statues you didn't start feeling until it was too late for you old at five and still i'm aging -D.S.

05-18-2003, 05:42 AM	#2 (permalink)
J.R.V.A. Junkie Location: Utah	Nice work. I'm glad I didnt start feeling before it was too late. Age is a state of mind I think. Thanks for sharing __________________ And as she plays, her sweet song of laughter floats through the air and warms my heart