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Sue 08-10-2004 08:45 AM

This isn't finished yet.. but...
 
here are the first 2 verses I've got so far.

Storms brewing inside of me
My love for you is dying
I hope I leave you crying
Crying for my love

You took my heart and turned it
into fire and you burned it
You tossed it and you threw it
Threw it all away


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I only need one more verse... but it hasn't come to me yet.

Dawson70 08-10-2004 10:57 AM

If that poem is from an event that occured in your life, then it seems you have a great way of channeling your emotions.
Nice poem, and I look forward to the rest of it.

Sue 08-10-2004 12:05 PM

Dawson, you hit it right on the mark... an event occured right in the beginning of july..


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