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Sue · 08-10-2004, 08:45 AM

here are the first 2 verses I've got so far.

Storms brewing inside of me
My love for you is dying
I hope I leave you crying
Crying for my love

You took my heart and turned it
into fire and you burned it
You tossed it and you threw it
Threw it all away

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I only need one more verse... but it hasn't come to me yet.

Dawson70 · 08-10-2004, 10:57 AM

If that poem is from an event that occured in your life, then it seems you have a great way of channeling your emotions.
Nice poem, and I look forward to the rest of it.

Sue · 08-10-2004, 12:05 PM

Dawson, you hit it right on the mark... an event occured right in the beginning of july..

08-10-2004, 08:45 AM	#1 (permalink)
Sue Teufel Hunden's Freundin Location: Westminster, CO	This isn't finished yet.. but... here are the first 2 verses I've got so far. Storms brewing inside of me My love for you is dying I hope I leave you crying Crying for my love You took my heart and turned it into fire and you burned it You tossed it and you threw it Threw it all away ---------------- I only need one more verse... but it hasn't come to me yet. __________________ Teg yw edrych tuag adref.

08-10-2004, 10:57 AM	#2 (permalink)
Dawson70 Here to Help My Fellow TFP'er Location: All over the Net....(ok Wisconsin)	If that poem is from an event that occured in your life, then it seems you have a great way of channeling your emotions. Nice poem, and I look forward to the rest of it. __________________ "I Finally Finished My Goal....You Can Too! Yippie Ki Ya...

08-10-2004, 12:05 PM	#3 (permalink)
Sue Teufel Hunden's Freundin Location: Westminster, CO	Dawson, you hit it right on the mark... an event occured right in the beginning of july.. __________________ Teg yw edrych tuag adref.