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Esen 07-19-2004 04:39 PM

Into the room
 
Into the room

She came into the room poisoning me
tying me into rings of confusion,
illusion
the sweet sanity of upset dreams being siphoned from your inner peace-
your inner safety,
Her love is malnourished and bleeding.
she leaves the scent of her desire corroding the flesh of my lips.
Release me!
Let your rotted words leave me in hunger no more.
a loaf of bread a thimble of juice,
a revelation that sanity is not all for void and nil.
Her hair tightens under the belly of my chin
squeezing and taunting the sweet embers of my own poisonous sin.
Release me, let me go, let me breath.
She straddles my spirit I buckle from her harness
convulse and shaking to spin from the deep solitude that if she leaves I will truly be alone.
she lays there and laughs.

tecoyah 07-19-2004 05:09 PM

Excellent....that was inspired Chauncey.

thebeat 07-19-2004 05:26 PM

Woah....I'm very impressed, that was really great!!

ForgottenKnight 07-23-2004 10:02 PM

Excellent!:thumbsup::thumbsup: Thanks for sharing your work!


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