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10-03-2004, 12:16 AM
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Crazy
Location: 1000 miles from nowhere
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Spoken from a dream into reality
This end you won't see How could it be did he love you more than me? Does he tuck you in before he leaves, or did he just fuck you better than me? did he ever give you his meal, just to make you feel, loved. or did he ever walk, 2 miles just to talk? did he ever send you a note, just to say i love you. or give you his coat, just to show you? Does he pray for your mind, that you may find, peace in your day, in every way? I did.
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10-04-2004, 07:37 AM
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Location: Japan
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Very nice. Great questioning as to why you were betrayed. Very emotional, I can relate from past relationships. Do you have any more?
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10-04-2004, 04:55 PM
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Location: 1000 miles from nowhere
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thank you
I've put up maybe a half dozen others...I guess you could try to search the literature forum for my username...within the last year.
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