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Old 05-18-2004, 04:30 PM   #1 (permalink)
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All these thoughts.....

First post I just found myself writing today (didnt know if its supposed to be a poem, free verse, song, whatever) and decided to post for some reason...


You want me to go back on my morals?
You want me to go back on my beliefs?
You say you'll do what feels right
I'll tell you I don't know what I feel
All these thoughts running through my head
Wondering about all the things we said
I don't know what I should do
'Cuz I'm still in love with you

Should I stay or should I go?
Are you worth it I wanna know
Will you be with me to the end?
Or will you just run away to your freind?
All these thoughts.....

You say you're afraid to love me
You say you don't wanna get bit,
You say you love me so much,
Then why do I feel like a piece of shit
The possibilities between us are endless
But right now life's just one big mess
Hopefully one day we'll find a way out
But right now I just wanna scream and shout
All these thoughts.....

I can't decide if I wanna be with you forever
Or if we should see each other never,
Now I'm the one that hurts,
Now I'm the one in pain,
All I know is that if I never see you again
I'll only have myself to blame
All these thoughts.....

I don't wanna beg for you back
I don't wanna deal with all this flak
It may be scary but its true,
I think after all of this
I'm still in love with you.....
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Old 05-18-2004, 11:03 PM   #2 (permalink)
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she's a lucky girl if you love her that much. do what your heart tells you
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Old 06-12-2004, 12:33 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Love hurts, doesn't it? Seems as if it's harder to start loving than to stop. Very good piece of literature!
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Old 06-12-2004, 10:55 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Very Nice, made me think....
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