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starlite 05-06-2003 01:39 PM

Inside and Out
 
On the inside Im hurting
Confused, Used
On the outside Im Laughing
Happy, Amused
On the inside I cry
I long to be loved
On the outside Im smiling
Confiedent, unmoved
On the inside Im different
Than I appear on the out
And that is jsut me
On the Inside and Out

little limey 05-06-2003 05:14 PM

I like this line:

On the inside Im different
Than I appear on the out

It's a nice change from saying "outside" and the reader knows what you mean.

riptide4070 05-07-2003 06:02 PM

I know the feeling. Starting a new job or moving some place new helps to raise my self esteem. Just trying to help.

Angel 05-07-2003 06:07 PM

Wow! Powerful message.
The mask of life...

Eowyn_Vala 05-09-2003 05:04 PM

I feel like I've read this before but I know that I haven't. I really like it. It is very expressive in a way that most people don't even think about. You have talent with words whether you want to believe me or not!


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