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Dissembled
Your right hand is outstretched
an offering of friendship Your right hand consoles me when I'm hurt catches me when I fall Your right hand comforts my mind when I've lost my way Your right hand does no wrong a lifetime of trust Where is your left? I need your hand now more than ever a crisis has become me a knife in my back Your right hand moves to alleviate but I find your left hand at last holding the knife, that has beset me |
I really like that. Nice work, thanks.
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I like the sentiment, but the rhythm feels a bit stilted to me.
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Ouch... the two sides of reality exposed... I know how that feels... Thanks for sharing.
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