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thed00t · 02-24-2004, 07:33 PM

I see beauty everywhere I look, but I can never seem to touch it.
Instead, it only seems to touch me.

I wish I could lose myself in it.
I wish I could run off with it.
I wish I could just stare at it.

Would it then get old?
Would I find new beauty in something else?
Could it run out?

I see beauty everywhere I look, but I can not define it.
Instead, it seems to define me.

In places I do not see beauty, ugliness protrudes.

I hate it.
I don’t want it.
I want to change it.

People say if you look hard enough, one can find beauty in anything.
Instead, I look at nothing.

Are they dreamers?
What do they know, I do not?
Is beauty in the eye of the beholder?

I see beauty everywhere I look, but it doesn’t seem right.
Instead, it is tarnished by the ugliness next to it.

I fear it.
I don’t want to look away.
I can’t do anything about it.

Should I not look?
Should I compare the two?
Should I not care?

Beauty is everywhere you look.

I see it in you. I see it in me. I will learn to see it where I do not.

losthellhound · 02-25-2004, 04:20 AM

very nice, thank you for sharing.. Its very conflicted too which is good..

vonstalhein · 02-25-2004, 01:57 PM

Would I find new beauty in something else?
Could it run out?

i think that is the best and most poignant two lines of the poem. Try turning it into the worst by writing 10 better ones. I reckon you could!

ForgottenKnight · 02-26-2004, 11:05 PM

Glad that beauty is showing itself to you! Good poem. Thanks for sharing!

02-24-2004, 07:33 PM	#1 (permalink)
thed00t I'm a fool.	Beauty I see beauty everywhere I look, but I can never seem to touch it. Instead, it only seems to touch me. I wish I could lose myself in it. I wish I could run off with it. I wish I could just stare at it. Would it then get old? Would I find new beauty in something else? Could it run out? I see beauty everywhere I look, but I can not define it. Instead, it seems to define me. In places I do not see beauty, ugliness protrudes. I hate it. I don’t want it. I want to change it. People say if you look hard enough, one can find beauty in anything. Instead, I look at nothing. Are they dreamers? What do they know, I do not? Is beauty in the eye of the beholder? I see beauty everywhere I look, but it doesn’t seem right. Instead, it is tarnished by the ugliness next to it. I fear it. I don’t want to look away. I can’t do anything about it. Should I not look? Should I compare the two? Should I not care? Beauty is everywhere you look. I see it in you. I see it in me. I will learn to see it where I do not.

02-25-2004, 04:20 AM	#2 (permalink)
losthellhound Thats MR. Muffin Face now Location: Everywhere work sends me	very nice, thank you for sharing.. Its very conflicted too which is good.. __________________ "Life is possible only with illusions. And so, the question for the science of mental health must become an absolutely new and revolutionary one, yet one that reflects the essence of the human condition: On what level of illusion does one live?" -- Ernest Becker, The Denial of Death

02-25-2004, 01:57 PM	#3 (permalink)
vonstalhein Insane Location: Where You Live.	Would I find new beauty in something else? Could it run out? i think that is the best and most poignant two lines of the poem. Try turning it into the worst by writing 10 better ones. I reckon you could! __________________ No Win No Fee

02-26-2004, 11:05 PM	#4 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	Glad that beauty is showing itself to you! Good poem. Thanks for sharing! __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?"