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CheeseButtons · 02-15-2004, 10:05 PM

This is my first song....

Why do you smile
Each day comes
Each day goes
How can you smile
What solace does the sun bring
What joy does the morning give
I do not know

Reverence to deity greater than me
Forgiveness is what has been given to be
The hope that lives and never dies
Understanding patience in lifes sighs
At the thought of waiting
For something that is to come

Why do you smile
Each day comes
Each day goes
How can you smile
What solace does the sun bring
What joy does the morning give
I cannot feel what you feel

Lonely attributes accompany.
Purity of intent surrounds.
Cause of pain clear.
The waiting continues but
No light will finish

Tigress · 03-15-2004, 06:35 PM

Wow dude, deep. Mucho impressed. You should keep postin. You are a sensitive poet. That's good.

CheeseButtons · 03-16-2004, 06:52 AM

I'm glad somebody finally enjoyed it.

Tigress · 03-16-2004, 07:20 AM

Of course I did, anytime. Please post more.

CheeseButtons · 03-16-2004, 10:54 AM

You may like this one then

http://www.tfproject.org/tfp/showthr...threadid=46156

Tigress · 03-16-2004, 10:58 AM

You sound kinda like i feel right now. You should look at my post a couple of threads down called, forgive me, my friends. (I don't know how to post a link to it, sorry.)

02-15-2004, 10:05 PM	#1 (permalink)
CheeseButtons Crazy Location: 1000 miles from nowhere	Waiting This is my first song.... Why do you smile Each day comes Each day goes How can you smile What solace does the sun bring What joy does the morning give I do not know Reverence to deity greater than me Forgiveness is what has been given to be The hope that lives and never dies Understanding patience in lifes sighs At the thought of waiting For something that is to come Why do you smile Each day comes Each day goes How can you smile What solace does the sun bring What joy does the morning give I cannot feel what you feel Lonely attributes accompany. Purity of intent surrounds. Cause of pain clear. The waiting continues but No light will finish __________________ Sorrow is better than laughter, because a sad face is good for the heart. -Ecclesiastes 7:3

03-15-2004, 06:35 PM	#2 (permalink)
Tigress Upright Location: Here, Now	Wow dude, deep. Mucho impressed. You should keep postin. You are a sensitive poet. That's good. __________________ I'm alive, It's today, I woke up this morning, Looks like another good day.

03-16-2004, 06:52 AM	#3 (permalink)
CheeseButtons Crazy Location: 1000 miles from nowhere	I'm glad somebody finally enjoyed it. __________________ Sorrow is better than laughter, because a sad face is good for the heart. -Ecclesiastes 7:3

03-16-2004, 07:20 AM	#4 (permalink)
Tigress Upright Location: Here, Now	Of course I did, anytime. Please post more. __________________ I'm alive, It's today, I woke up this morning, Looks like another good day.

03-16-2004, 10:54 AM	#5 (permalink)
CheeseButtons Crazy Location: 1000 miles from nowhere	You may like this one then http://www.tfproject.org/tfp/showthr...threadid=46156 __________________ Sorrow is better than laughter, because a sad face is good for the heart. -Ecclesiastes 7:3

03-16-2004, 10:58 AM	#6 (permalink)
Tigress Upright Location: Here, Now	You sound kinda like i feel right now. You should look at my post a couple of threads down called, forgive me, my friends. (I don't know how to post a link to it, sorry.) __________________ I'm alive, It's today, I woke up this morning, Looks like another good day.