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04-22-2003, 09:51 PM
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Psycho
Location: in a deep, dark hole where rainbow creatures attack me to eat my fingernails.
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my curse
sorrows lost
my will is gone forever unseen i wait for dawn craddle robbed i'm thrown to hell a broken freedom i cast this spell all alone beauty forsaken flood the plains your life is taken chained and shackled a dead weight soul tears of blood slave to a troll |
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04-27-2003, 06:49 PM
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Psycho
Location: lost
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That's really cool... it really got images into my head. I really like the first stanza, about waiting for dawn after will is gone. Something about it clicks in my head.
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05-02-2003, 08:56 PM
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Insane
Location: There's no place like home..
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I really enjoyed reading this. It spoke to me and I just had to tell you great job!
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