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fallen_angel · 11-11-2003, 12:31 PM

My loins burn
With your every caress upon my exposed flesh
Sending me closer to the very edge
I feared to stand next to
Now I pray to fall
Each breath I take brings me closer to you
Your gentle penetration of my bounderies
Brings us to such exilerating heights
Our skin burns with each others gathering passion
Consuming us in a whirlwind of emotions
Bring us to new planes of awareness
We are the only two in this world we have created
Nothing matters more than this moment
This one second in tme
We are one, joined in this firery passion
Flying higher than even the angels
We dance in a mating ritual of the pagans
Wild and free, no bonds can hold us
No laws can tie us to the ground
We are one with each other
Climbing to a shuddering cracendo
Collapsing into one another
Spent in each others arms

SSJwrestler · 11-11-2003, 03:18 PM

wow, that was an amazing poem. very touching. keep up the good work, you're a wonderful writer

tecoyah · 11-11-2003, 03:50 PM

Even the horned god took a second look at that one...think I'll go wake up my wife lol

Esen · 11-11-2003, 07:55 PM

You take things that are suppose to be beutiful and instead make them real. That is the true beauty of this poem.

This is an amazing poem.
I wanted to read it again.

J.R.V.A. · 11-13-2003, 03:06 PM

Yes,I agree. You have a way with words. Thanks

riptide4070 · 12-07-2003, 07:27 PM

I love reading your work Fallen Angel!!!!! Never doubt your potential.

absence_of_color · 12-08-2003, 10:35 AM

*thumbs up*

ForgottenKnight · 12-08-2003, 05:38 PM

That's Fantastic! You're an amazing poet! I love reading your work!

taliendo · 12-13-2003, 12:46 AM

I concur, wonderful work.

lightning · 12-16-2003, 06:32 AM

Outstanding poetry Angel... I would like to see more

fallen_angel · 01-14-2004, 10:16 AM

Thank you all so very much, you truely do not know how much this means to get praise such as this. I know I havent been around much but I just want to say that I value everyone of you and thank you from the bottom of my heart. This place has become my safety net, and I charish each one of you.

11-11-2003, 12:31 PM	#1 (permalink)
fallen_angel Psycho Location: Somewhere between the Havens and the Earth	Passion My loins burn With your every caress upon my exposed flesh Sending me closer to the very edge I feared to stand next to Now I pray to fall Each breath I take brings me closer to you Your gentle penetration of my bounderies Brings us to such exilerating heights Our skin burns with each others gathering passion Consuming us in a whirlwind of emotions Bring us to new planes of awareness We are the only two in this world we have created Nothing matters more than this moment This one second in tme We are one, joined in this firery passion Flying higher than even the angels We dance in a mating ritual of the pagans Wild and free, no bonds can hold us No laws can tie us to the ground We are one with each other Climbing to a shuddering cracendo Collapsing into one another Spent in each others arms __________________ from the Havens I have fallen. . . to the earth as a mangled form. . . writhing in pain, my wings torn and bloodied. . . I have one purpose, only one goal. . . to find you and love you, for I am your. . . fallen angel Last edited by fallen_angel; 11-11-2003 at 12:33 PM..

11-11-2003, 03:50 PM	#3 (permalink)
tecoyah Illusionary	Even the horned god took a second look at that one...think I'll go wake up my wife lol __________________ Holding onto anger is like grasping a hot coal with the intent of throwing it at someone else; you are the one who gets burned. - Buddha

11-11-2003, 07:55 PM	#4 (permalink)
Esen TFPer formaly known as Chauncey Location: North East	You take things that are suppose to be beutiful and instead make them real. That is the true beauty of this poem. This is an amazing poem. I wanted to read it again. __________________ ~Esen What is everyone doing in my room?

11-13-2003, 03:06 PM	#5 (permalink)
J.R.V.A. Junkie Location: Utah	Yes,I agree. You have a way with words. Thanks __________________ And as she plays, her sweet song of laughter floats through the air and warms my heart

12-07-2003, 07:27 PM	#6 (permalink)
riptide4070 Addict Location: Boone, NC	I love reading your work Fallen Angel!!!!! Never doubt your potential. __________________ "the greatest trick the devil ever pulled, was making the world believe he didn't exist" -Kevin Spacey 'The Usual Suspects'

11-11-2003, 03:18 PM	#2 (permalink)
SSJwrestler Banned Location: Davidson, NC/ Manassas, VA	wow, that was an amazing poem. very touching. keep up the good work, you're a wonderful writer

12-08-2003, 10:35 AM	#7 (permalink)
absence_of_color Insane Location: in a golden garden of grey	thumbs up __________________ ...absent of everything.

12-08-2003, 05:38 PM	#8 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	That's Fantastic! You're an amazing poet! I love reading your work! __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?"

12-13-2003, 12:46 AM	#9 (permalink)
taliendo Insane Location: an indelible crawl through the gutters	I concur, wonderful work. __________________ -LIFE IS ABSURD-

12-16-2003, 06:32 AM	#10 (permalink)
lightning Tilted Location: Texas	Outstanding poetry Angel... I would like to see more

01-14-2004, 10:16 AM	#11 (permalink)
fallen_angel Psycho Location: Somewhere between the Havens and the Earth	Thank you all so very much, you truely do not know how much this means to get praise such as this. I know I havent been around much but I just want to say that I value everyone of you and thank you from the bottom of my heart. This place has become my safety net, and I charish each one of you. __________________ from the Havens I have fallen. . . to the earth as a mangled form. . . writhing in pain, my wings torn and bloodied. . . I have one purpose, only one goal. . . to find you and love you, for I am your. . . fallen angel