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Esen · 11-14-2003, 02:46 AM

The morning is madness,
my eyes open and they scream.
dried is the residual that once coated my dreams
now frozen upon the torture of daylight.
The sleeping of my mind shutters and trembles
hypnotic is the punch of reality that throws me into a streaming shower of water.
now purified for the day
I am in a fit of dillusionment.

taliendo · 11-14-2003, 12:15 PM

this made me smile. tee hehe

mb99usa · 11-14-2003, 12:23 PM

Best feeling of the day.

SSJwrestler · 11-16-2003, 12:49 AM

i know the feeling man....after a friday night...WOOH!

J.R.V.A. · 11-16-2003, 07:31 PM

Yea, I know how you feel. A fit of......
Good writing, Thanks

ForgottenKnight · 11-17-2003, 06:46 AM

Great piece! It made me smile. Life is nothing more than living a dillusional dream.

Esen · 11-18-2003, 02:32 AM

Thanks a lot , I'm glad you all were able to get a kick out of it

ARTelevision · 11-18-2003, 04:51 AM

good morning!

...like a good slap in the face! I needed that...

carebear · 11-18-2003, 07:23 PM

I love the shower line especially.

11-14-2003, 02:46 AM	#1 (permalink)
Esen TFPer formaly known as Chauncey Location: North East	Morning The morning is madness, my eyes open and they scream. dried is the residual that once coated my dreams now frozen upon the torture of daylight. The sleeping of my mind shutters and trembles hypnotic is the punch of reality that throws me into a streaming shower of water. now purified for the day I am in a fit of dillusionment. __________________ ~Esen What is everyone doing in my room?

11-14-2003, 12:15 PM	#2 (permalink)
taliendo Insane Location: an indelible crawl through the gutters	this made me smile. tee hehe __________________ -LIFE IS ABSURD-

11-14-2003, 12:23 PM	#3 (permalink)
mb99usa Keep on rolling. It only hurts for a little while. Location: wherever I am	Best feeling of the day. __________________ So, what's your point? It's not an attitude, it's a way of life.

11-16-2003, 07:31 PM	#5 (permalink)
J.R.V.A. Junkie Location: Utah	Yea, I know how you feel. A fit of...... Good writing, Thanks __________________ And as she plays, her sweet song of laughter floats through the air and warms my heart

11-17-2003, 06:46 AM	#6 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	Great piece! It made me smile. Life is nothing more than living a dillusional dream. __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?"

11-16-2003, 12:49 AM	#4 (permalink)
SSJwrestler Banned Location: Davidson, NC/ Manassas, VA	i know the feeling man....after a friday night...WOOH!

11-18-2003, 02:32 AM	#7 (permalink)
Esen TFPer formaly known as Chauncey Location: North East	Thanks a lot , I'm glad you all were able to get a kick out of it __________________ ~Esen What is everyone doing in my room?

11-18-2003, 04:51 AM	#8 (permalink)
ARTelevision I change Location: USA	good morning! ...like a good slap in the face! I needed that... __________________ create evolution

11-18-2003, 07:23 PM	#9 (permalink)
carebear Tilted Location: oklahoma	I love the shower line especially. __________________ go cubs!