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fallen_angel 11-04-2003 12:07 PM

Obscurity
 
I dont want you here
But I dont want to be without you
I cant stand you seeing me like this
But I need you here to help me through this
Everything I dont want, I need
I can no longer control my world
I can feel the very bone from my spine
Being eaten slowly away
My muscles spasm in pain
Doubling me over
Weakening my reservoirs
Every turn I make
I crack a little more
My sanity is on the brink of failure
I no longer think clearly
I need you here to hold me tight
Think not of my actions toward you
Just know that I truely care

No one knows what this is like
This pain that incases my body
My strongest feature
Is now my weakest point
My center is being stolen from within
I could fail at any moment
The not knowing is the worst
I fear that fall more than life itself
For it will take my life with it
Leaving me broken
And incomplete

*Nikki* 11-04-2003 03:07 PM

Very well written;)

ForgottenKnight 11-04-2003 04:03 PM

Very nice! It's full of emotion and very well written.

chavos 11-04-2003 07:02 PM

i can feel the intensity, something powerful and moving out of what must be something very painful for you. here's wishing to happier inspirations for you...

Esen 11-04-2003 07:07 PM

Fuck being well written, that was beutifull.
I have always enjoyed your poetry and every time I read something of yours it reminds me of how potent you are.
That was an amazing piece of you.
Thanks

J.R.V.A. 11-06-2003 04:56 AM

Nice.........

punkgrl1984 11-06-2003 12:13 PM

WOW!

mb99usa 11-06-2003 12:19 PM

truly inspiring. noone ever wants to end up like that.

SSJwrestler 11-06-2003 08:31 PM

good read, keep it up


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