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Obscurity
I dont want you here
But I dont want to be without you I cant stand you seeing me like this But I need you here to help me through this Everything I dont want, I need I can no longer control my world I can feel the very bone from my spine Being eaten slowly away My muscles spasm in pain Doubling me over Weakening my reservoirs Every turn I make I crack a little more My sanity is on the brink of failure I no longer think clearly I need you here to hold me tight Think not of my actions toward you Just know that I truely care No one knows what this is like This pain that incases my body My strongest feature Is now my weakest point My center is being stolen from within I could fail at any moment The not knowing is the worst I fear that fall more than life itself For it will take my life with it Leaving me broken And incomplete |
Very well written;)
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Very nice! It's full of emotion and very well written.
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i can feel the intensity, something powerful and moving out of what must be something very painful for you. here's wishing to happier inspirations for you...
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Fuck being well written, that was beutifull.
I have always enjoyed your poetry and every time I read something of yours it reminds me of how potent you are. That was an amazing piece of you. Thanks |
Nice.........
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WOW!
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truly inspiring. noone ever wants to end up like that.
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good read, keep it up
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