Falling Away From You
 

I fall away from you, again
I sacrifice for you, again
I mess things up for you, again
I hate myself for you, again
I feel alone for you, again
I blind myself for you, again
I seek the truth for you, again
I lied to me for you, again
I orgasmed for you, again
I am a husk for you, again
I open me for you, again
I want our love for you, again
I ask by name for you, again
I curse your name for you, again
I cut myself for you, again
I hear your word for you, again
I serve only for you, again


(for those reading, who do you feel this is addressed to? I had someone certain in mind when I wrote it, but I want to gauge audience reaction)

Well, this could be for a partner, or for oneself, or for God. However, I stumble on the orgasm part when reading it as addressed to God.
Good stuff.

I'd say a partner, but maybe because that's the way I relate to it... though I can see how it can be for oneself as well...

I really liked your poem :) its really good :thumbsup:

I feel it is more toward yourself. At least thats the way I would have writen it if i wrote it. Good work. Thank you.

I agree with Angel, totally.

In forming my own opinion after reading your work and the opinions of others, I'd say it was to your current lover or your last lover.

good stuff!

Yea, good stuff. please share more. tnks