voodoo rose - Tilted Forum Project Discussion Community

scarebearjinx · 04-23-2003, 11:19 AM

a white rose...
so pure and true.
it's beauty unknown to the world.

my love for you...
so pure and true,
yet unknown to you.

this white rose
is my heart,
my love,
that you toyed with.

these needles are the lies...
the lies you fed me.
the lies you told me to steal me away from myself.

this blood...
this blood is mine.
this is the blood that i shed for you.

this rose bleeds because you made my heart bleed.

this rose is for you.
something pure stained with death.
stained with the death you nearly brought on me.

something pure,
nearly destroyed by your hand.

Atropos4 · 04-23-2003, 11:34 AM

i like it...vengence in a violent but not so vionlent way...

Esen · 09-03-2003, 02:06 PM

right on man,
Let em know exactly what they did,
I like this a lot

J.R.V.A. · 09-10-2003, 07:20 AM

Wow... this is awesome writing.. Thanks for sharing

04-23-2003, 11:19 AM	#1 (permalink)
scarebearjinx Psycho Location: in a deep, dark hole where rainbow creatures attack me to eat my fingernails.	voodoo rose a white rose... so pure and true. it's beauty unknown to the world. my love for you... so pure and true, yet unknown to you. this white rose is my heart, my love, that you toyed with. these needles are the lies... the lies you fed me. the lies you told me to steal me away from myself. this blood... this blood is mine. this is the blood that i shed for you. this rose bleeds because you made my heart bleed. this rose is for you. something pure stained with death. stained with the death you nearly brought on me. something pure, nearly destroyed by your hand.

04-23-2003, 11:34 AM	#2 (permalink)
Atropos4 Think about it Location: North Carolina	i like it...vengence in a violent but not so vionlent way... __________________ Minds are like parachutes. They work better open. "If I were Hermione, I would have licked his pantleg."

09-03-2003, 02:06 PM	#3 (permalink)
Esen TFPer formaly known as Chauncey Location: North East	right on man, Let em know exactly what they did, I like this a lot __________________ ~Esen What is everyone doing in my room?

09-10-2003, 07:20 AM	#4 (permalink)
J.R.V.A. Junkie Location: Utah	Wow... this is awesome writing.. Thanks for sharing __________________ And as she plays, her sweet song of laughter floats through the air and warms my heart