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h2ogo69 08-14-2003 11:57 PM

a poem about a slaughtered friendship
 
you fucking kill me
all you say
all you do
destroys me

i cant stand the sight of you
or even a mention of your name
ohh... how tired you make me
i cannot describe

now im stuck
i dont know how
how will i break it to you
how can i rid myself of you

these thoughts
of being around you again
make me yearn for death
i wish to curl up and die

you are a monster
if i see you i dont know what ill do
i can only hope
it'll be over soon




tell me what u think... brutal honesty

SnotGoblin 08-15-2003 05:32 AM

I'm glad you vented your frustraion into your keyboard instead of your ex-friend!

It helps to get it out, eh?

sub zero 08-16-2003 11:38 PM

In that poem, it sounds like you're screaming.

h2ogo69 08-17-2003 10:20 AM

good... its supposed to sound angry some parts are screaming... siome arent

J.R.V.A. 08-17-2003 08:28 PM

Honestly,thats brutal. I have felt the same way, I feel your pain through your words. Time my friend,time.....


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