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09-12-2003, 10:55 AM
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Psycho
Location: Somewhere between the Havens and the Earth
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Searching For
The sand of time slowly drains
Leaving chafe upon the wind But in this moment Time stands still Tonight its you and I together Your kiss, your smile I would die for, like The way I lost my heart to you that day For destiny had decided I should look your direction For I have looked for a lifetime And loved for a day I never knew I was lost Until you found me I may not hear music looking in your eyes But I feel the rhythm of your body close to mine And when I look in your eyes I know now what I had been searching for sorry had to change some spelling errors
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from the Havens I have fallen. . . to the earth as a mangled form. . . writhing in pain, my wings torn and bloodied. . . I have one purpose, only one goal. . . to find you and love you, for I am your. . . fallen angel Last edited by fallen_angel; 09-13-2003 at 12:21 PM.. |
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09-12-2003, 10:58 AM
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Junkie
Location: Utah
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Swwweeeeeeettttttttttttt!!!!!!
I really like this part.. I may not hear music looking in your eyes But I feel the rhythm of your body close to mine
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And as she plays, her sweet song of laughter floats through the air and warms my heart |
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09-16-2003, 09:41 AM
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Insane
Location: There's no place like home..
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Wow, now if only I can figure out who you are talking about!
Just Kidding! I really like this. It is very sweet but not overly sugary sweet! You say everything so simply that it makes it that much more moving. "But in this moment Time stands still Tonight its you and I together" that is my favorite part!
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Cain: I know what you're doing. I've lead troops into battle before. DG: And, how am I doing? Cain: Well, there's less *hugging* when I do it |
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