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Esen · 08-04-2003, 03:58 PM

In the living of my room
I open up
Popping fizzing
the cans are eternally insync
listening gurgling
foaming
Twisted and scented tearing not needing
all the courseness taken away from your thirst
empty crushed
recycled rinse
repeat

J.R.V.A. · 08-04-2003, 05:46 PM

In the living of my room... I really like this, thank you for sharing it

Esen · 08-05-2003, 04:45 PM

thank you,

08-04-2003, 03:58 PM	#1 (permalink)
Esen TFPer formaly known as Chauncey Location: North East	an open can In the living of my room I open up Popping fizzing the cans are eternally insync listening gurgling foaming Twisted and scented tearing not needing all the courseness taken away from your thirst empty crushed recycled rinse repeat __________________ ~Esen What is everyone doing in my room?

08-04-2003, 05:46 PM	#2 (permalink)
J.R.V.A. Junkie Location: Utah	In the living of my room... I really like this, thank you for sharing it __________________ And as she plays, her sweet song of laughter floats through the air and warms my heart

08-05-2003, 04:45 PM	#3 (permalink)
Esen TFPer formaly known as Chauncey Location: North East	thank you, __________________ ~Esen What is everyone doing in my room?