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Old 07-23-2003, 03:03 PM   #1 (permalink)
Psycho
 
Location: Somewhere between the Havens and the Earth
Joe's song

This is something that was said between two people whose souls finally found each other. ~ is the girl and - is the boy
needing an honest opinion from anyone who reads this please.

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~ Do you feel the connection?
- Always did
~ Same with her?
- In a way, but that boat goes around, in a way
~ If had no rings attached, me or her?
- Rings dont seem to hold, my fingers slip out, its to loose
- Tears you can wipe away
~ I have no tears, just open wounds
- They will close
~ With gentle, healing hands
- I will
- I am with you
- You must believe
~ My life has ben based on false hopes and dreams
~ My spirit can handle no more rejection
- You have to trust
- If I were there you would
~ If you were fully mine
- I am jsut in jail
~ Why did you have to get caught before I was there to save you
- I made a mistake, but I will find a way out
~ Make sure that is what you want, first
- I do, But you have to want it too
~ I do
- Not by feeling, but with soul and heart
~ An internal ache that eases when you are near
~ Constant reminder of a burning need?
- Need to love again
- Dont be scared
~ With loves comes pain I can not forget
- You must be free
~ When I am free to love, only then will I love thee
- But one I be, and set you free to love and care
- These bars may seem hard, but no way am I there
- You have to want the bars to go away
~ More truely do I wish them gone to be free
~ And in my arms once more
- I am holding you now
~ I close my eyes and I feel you, smell you, taste you
- Be one and the soul can not be broken
- My wings hurt
- I am falling for you
- The tears I cry have seen the pain and breaking of my heart to many times
- I can cry no more
- Soul has been in darkness for so long
- Even when I thought I had found that person
~ Two wounded hearts may soon mend together
~ Intertwinning lost souls as one
- My sould I could not find, but when I kissed you the light was there, and when I looked in your eyes he was there
- Tears sometimes run down my face for none to see
- Not for sadness, but for happiness
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from the Havens I have fallen. . . to the earth as a mangled form. . . writhing in pain, my wings torn and bloodied. . . I have one purpose, only one goal. . . to find you and love you, for I am your. . . fallen angel
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Old 07-23-2003, 04:32 PM   #2 (permalink)
Naughty Just Right
 
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Location: Euphoria
This is so very real. An emotional piece of work that grasps inner conflicts of captured souls. I like it a lot. Thank you for sharing.
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In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer.
~Albert Camus
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Old 07-23-2003, 05:57 PM   #3 (permalink)
Psycho
 
Location: Somewhere between the Havens and the Earth
Im going to confess something just so you all know what this is about. . . joe is one of my friends and the moment that we saw each other something clicked. this was a conversation that we had last night this is actual text from it. i didnt leave anything out. for some reason i think hes the one. and i think he thinks the same way. but im scared to trust him i just wanted someones opinion on what you can get from this
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from the Havens I have fallen. . . to the earth as a mangled form. . . writhing in pain, my wings torn and bloodied. . . I have one purpose, only one goal. . . to find you and love you, for I am your. . . fallen angel
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Old 07-24-2003, 06:37 AM   #4 (permalink)
Junkie
 
Location: Utah
Yes, when you have been hurt before, its hard to trust. Dont deny yourself love, based on fear.
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And as she plays,
her sweet song of laughter
floats through the air
and warms my heart
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