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scarebearjinx 04-22-2003 11:57 AM

what else is there?
 
shed a tear
hollow your soul
breathe the gas
pack a bowl

cry a river
breathe the wind
grab a hold
down the gin

bleed a little
fall in a rut
find a knife
make a cut

stab right through
drop your arm
drain your life
there's no harm

Angel 04-22-2003 04:59 PM

This is quite deep. A lot of emotion packed in these words. Here's to a happier tomorrow...

Dorian_S 04-25-2003 12:35 AM

I absolutely love this; I believe I know exactly how you feel.

Now, I may not know exactly, but the poem made me feel like I do.

forgotten_dream 04-25-2003 12:46 AM

I definitely felt where you were coming from. This poem expressed exactly how I feel at times in a way I can never seem to. Thanks, and keep up the good work!


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