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06-04-2003, 01:44 PM
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Psycho
Location: Oregon
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"dream"
All comments welcome
Dream by viveleroi0 Joy is the harmony which appears, From leaves roused from a gentle breeze. Contentment is the warmth that rises, From the sun soothing husks of wheat. Sadness is the somber gloominess, From clouds hung low about to weep. Nature is a show hard to picture, Being anything but a dream.
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06-24-2003, 07:55 AM
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Insane
Location: There's no place like home..
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I like it! There is feeling in this. It almost seems to short, like you don't want it to end.
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06-25-2003, 02:22 PM
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Transfer Agent
Location: NYC
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To me this means...
Nature is symbolic of life and we perceive emotions from the correlation we make between nature and reality, so leaves may perform a joyous dance, husks of wheat stand tall to bask in the warmth of the sun, and dark low rain clouds pour out like the heavy sadness that weighs down our hearts.
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06-25-2003, 02:38 PM
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Psycho
Location: Oregon
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Quite so. My initial idea was to show how much of an influence the motion and images I see around me are... Nature itself directly affects my emotions, and this is my realization of that.
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06-25-2003, 04:39 PM
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Naughty Just Right
Location: Euphoria
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Ah, you touched a spot within me where I sing and dance. Nature is my world. A feel good piece!
Thank you 
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 In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer. ~Albert Camus |
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07-20-2003, 08:02 PM
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Psycho
Location: Somewhere between the Havens and the Earth
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very insightfull thank you for sharing
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