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Old 07-08-2003, 10:25 PM   #1 (permalink)
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The Secret

Knowing smiles
Hidden Caresses
Shadows of the daylight
Illusions of the minds eye

The night holds our passion
Behind closed doors and shuttered windows
Our voices mingle with the nightengales song
Forgotten at first light

Separate lives of every man
Intertwin in daylight hours
Each person hidding from one another
Each with a secret

I am your night
She is your day
No secret in the night
But in the day

I am the secret
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Old 07-09-2003, 08:39 AM   #2 (permalink)
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starlite this one made my jaw hit the floor.

I know EXACTLY where you come from with this one....I am living that hell too.

Keep writing...it's a wonderful release.
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