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I'll ask when I'm ready....
Location: Firmly in the middle....
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Don't have time to read it in full, but I like it so far. Really like it.
More please!
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Falling Angel
Location: L.A. L.A. land
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Well done. If the rest of the story is as consistently well done, I can see it selling.
Reminds me of Dick Francis.
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