What Can I Want?

[MacGnG]

I dedicate this to all the Dizzy Broads out there.


What Can I Want?

what do i want
what can i do
what do i want to do
what should i want

i want something to do
i can do anything
i dont want anything
i dont know what i want

I Want Someone

to hold
to see
to feel
to think of

to be with
to be there
to do anything
to want something

To Want Me

to want them
to want to be
to be with them
to be there for them

To Be

be like a bee
like a busy bee
buzz busy bee
buzz around honey
for some honey

that honey
my honey
our honey
there's honey

Like A Bee

some bee
honey bee
you be
my bee

Busy Bee

busy bee
honey bee
i be
a bee

I Want A Dizzy Bee

[Angel]

Well now, that was fun to read...out loud...

Try it...3 times, fast and out loud....

[MacGnG]

well i just started writting it and thats what it evolved into. kinda dark in the begining but it turned out good

*read the lines that are capitalized

**dizzy broads are a bunch of my female friends (dizzy is an inside joke) which makes it somehwat meaningful and funny at the end

[Angel]

Heh, funny you should mention to read the capitalized lines...I tend to look for things like that and I had already done so. In addition, they stand out on their own which drew my eye. It was a fun read. You should "just start writing" more often.

[MacGnG]

thanx

i will, have some more stuff to post.

[Eowyn_Vala]

I really enjoyed reading this. Great work!

[J.R.V.A.]

Nice work. I like the hidden meaning. Thanks for sharing

[*Nikki*]

Well that was unexpected.

Nice job, you made me smile.