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HogansGoat · 12-24-2005, 11:34 PM

http://o31.net/

This is my cousins' first foray into the world of comics...

Please be gentle!

HG

cinnles · 12-25-2005, 06:49 AM

Love the site style and the comics are pretty well drawn too!

Might have to read the whole thing from the start to understand though....

Mister Coaster · 12-27-2005, 07:43 AM

***constructive criticism ahead***

I like the overall feel of the site itself. However, for comic art, I'd reccomend redrawing the artwork in ink, making all shadows a 100% black, then coloring it. I think the raw artistic talent is there, but seeing a comic that is nothing but pencil lines that get colored in will never be taken seriously. There is a certian "recipe for success" that when not followed, makes for an uphill battle.

12-24-2005, 11:34 PM	#1 (permalink)
HogansGoat Upright	What do you think? http://o31.net/ This is my cousins' first foray into the world of comics... Please be gentle! HG Last edited by HogansGoat; 12-24-2005 at 11:40 PM..

12-27-2005, 07:43 AM	#3 (permalink)
Mister Coaster Big & Brassy Location: The "Canyon"	*constructive criticism ahead* I like the overall feel of the site itself. However, for comic art, I'd reccomend redrawing the artwork in ink, making all shadows a 100% black, then coloring it. I think the raw artistic talent is there, but seeing a comic that is nothing but pencil lines that get colored in will never be taken seriously. There is a certian "recipe for success" that when not followed, makes for an uphill battle. __________________ If you have any poo... fling it NOW!

12-25-2005, 06:49 AM	#2 (permalink)
cinnles Addict	Love the site style and the comics are pretty well drawn too! Might have to read the whole thing from the start to understand though....