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ngdawg 11-10-2005 07:26 PM

So I'm trying to draw in Illustrator
 
And being a lefty...doing right-hand mouse drawing is extremely hard (I can't afford a tablet)
Photoshop is easier as I'm not going over each tiny piece with a pencil tool-if I wanted to change a part, I lassoed, made my changes.
My arm is tired, but here's the first of a couple of my tries. Don't be TOO harsh, but if you see something really odd, point it out, please!
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v3...g/josieweb.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v3...ntmumsillu.jpg

majik_6 11-10-2005 09:20 PM

Wow! It looks like you've got the right idea. It took me a long time to get used to Illustrator. As far as a tablet goes, I've got one, but honestly find it easier in Illustrator to use the mouse (I use the tablet for Photoshop all the time, though).

I think you're making a great start, and with a bit more time you'll be a true pro. :)

Mister Coaster 11-11-2005 07:35 AM

I'd say you are coming along nicely....

For the portrait, I see quite a few "loops" in the lines, especially in the hair. This is where the stroke crosses itself forming a single point, then expanding again. For me, it's an immediate sign that you have lost control of your handles. Perhaps you did this on purpose? If so, I think it would look better without. Here is what I mean by a "loop" in the stroke...
http://img173.imageshack.us/img173/4948/loop3qi.th.jpg

As for the flowers, they are looking pretty good. Your shading, however, definately looks spotty. I'm seeing some linear gradients, some radial gradients and a few solid color fills as well. Also, I'm seeing some heavy stroke lines that don't really belong. To give a more realistic look, I would suggest the learning of the mesh gradient tool. It's a real bear to learn (i'm not that great with it just yet) but the results can look near photo-realistic. Also, I'm not sure what all those white spots are doing.

Please see the above comments as constructive criticism, and not an outright slam. So far I see a lot of potential, but there is ALWAYS more to learn in Illustrator.

majik_6 11-11-2005 08:44 PM

I second the recommendation to learn the Gradient Mesh. I'm going to try to teach myself the mesh tool this winter, since I've seen how incredible the results can be. I hadn't initially noticed the "looping" in the portrait, but now I see it. It's something that you can overcome with practice, though it's frustrating at first for sure!

If you need inspiration, you can check out www.lifeinvector.com

I go to that site frequently just to remind myself what CAN be done with illustrator and try to glean what information I can from looking at the illustration portfolio.

ngdawg 11-12-2005 05:27 PM

Oh damn, I forgot to fill that white in! :lol:
No, the hair 'loops' wasn't intentional, just didn't know how to make them solid curls, and then when feathering, of course the loops thinned more.
The mums lines, yea I know some are too thick-is there a way to blend a stroke so there's no definitive line? The centers in them were darker, but gradient didn't do what I wanted.
I'm more for simplicity of the real rather than having someone say, 'photo or drawing?' when looking at it. The center flower in the mums came closest to that, I think, but the one on the right has more depth.

majik_6 11-12-2005 10:18 PM

I'm not sure what you mean by "no definitive line", but there is the option to turn off stroke color, so that there's only a fill color. You can also make it so that the stroke is the same color as the fill or even turn down the stroke weight to make a thinner line.

ngdawg 11-13-2005 08:23 AM

Yes, knew that....just didn't see anything that allows one to blend a stroke line(feather, etc). Probably comes down to better color matching and/or being more precise-drawing each shade, even the tiniest, seperately...still experimenting! :)

ngdawg 11-13-2005 12:16 PM

Silly me, Gaussian Blur!
 
This took me about 2-3 hours:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v349/ngdawg/jolie.jpg

Mantus 11-13-2005 01:52 PM

Ooooo shiny!

The eyes and lips turned out rather delicious. I wan't to see more!

Zephyr66 11-13-2005 02:31 PM

I'm not much of a critic, so I don't have a lot to say, But the eyes look really great on the last one.

ngdawg 11-16-2005 01:28 PM

I think I got faces down ok:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v3...g/blondeba.jpg

Tirian 11-24-2005 09:34 PM

anyone wanting practice in illustrator and wanting to contribute to a good project, feel free to contribute to the open clipart project at www.openclipart.org

theres usually a request or two to provide inspiration as well.

your work is lookin good to me!!!


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