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ngdawg · 02-26-2005, 06:54 PM

If you see something wrong(other than the entire thing), feel free to point it out-I haven't done a drawing of this sort since I was in high school, but I figured it was time to try again(I think I was better at it then!)
I started out with the basic pencil drawing:

Then, rather than do a wash and finish it off the old fashioned way, I went into trusty old PS7:

The biggest problem I see is the flatness of the buildings in the rear, but I can't seem to give them any details to set them off. Ideas?

clavus · 02-26-2005, 07:08 PM

Darken them. Light pushes things forward. Darkeness makes things receed.

ngdawg · 02-26-2005, 07:21 PM

duh..........thank you ,clavus!
Anything else?

Konichiwaneko · 02-27-2005, 12:09 AM

it needs a cat in it.

CityOfAngels · 02-27-2005, 01:10 AM

You need to blow one of 'em up; make it look war-torn. :-p

tecoyah · 02-27-2005, 08:55 AM

Excellent work.....

I recommend some shading of the skyline in back....and perhaps a reference item in front of the back buildings.....another trash can or something.

paddyjoe · 02-27-2005, 09:15 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by tecoyah

and perhaps a reference item in front of the back buildings......

coupla hookers maybe......hehe

nice work dawg......

I get quite envious of folks who can draw this well. I can't express myself without my damn camera.

ngdawg · 02-27-2005, 10:13 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by tecoyah

Excellent work.....

I recommend some shading of the skyline in back....and perhaps a reference item in front of the back buildings.....another trash can or something.

looking to put maybe an old truck or something toward the back. I had tried to do a shadowy/misty city skyline behind the whole thing ( in marker tracings) but it just did not look right. I started this so I could incorporate some of my own photos(wanted a street scene,but didn't want to use someone else's), but it seems to be taking on a life of its own!

ngdawg · 02-27-2005, 03:52 PM

another version-added a couple of things and darkened, shadowed and blended those back buildings a bit more

K-Wise · 02-27-2005, 04:31 PM

That looks really awesome ngdawg. Looks right out of a book illustration. I love it

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Asta!!

vermin · 02-28-2005, 12:04 PM

That's really cool. I've tried some perspective stuff but never took it to your extreme of awesome-itivity. And I like the kitty in the lower right corner.

Lebell · 02-28-2005, 12:30 PM

There are details you can add to the top of the buildings that will help.

Some I can think of would be chimneys, power/phone lines, water cisterns, roof access stairwells, and vent pipes.

All would be visible to some degree over the roof line.

Oh, and your sidewalk lines receeding would still be parallel to the curb line along the bottom.

But seriously, that is a nice drawing.

Hampshire · 03-06-2005, 08:46 PM

wow thats amazing. Looks like a comic book drawing. You should send them in to someone to see what they think. NIce work!

02-26-2005, 06:54 PM	#1 (permalink)
ngdawg peekaboo Location: on the back, bitch	Haven't done this since I was 16! If you see something wrong(other than the entire thing), feel free to point it out-I haven't done a drawing of this sort since I was in high school, but I figured it was time to try again(I think I was better at it then!) I started out with the basic pencil drawing: Then, rather than do a wash and finish it off the old fashioned way, I went into trusty old PS7: The biggest problem I see is the flatness of the buildings in the rear, but I can't seem to give them any details to set them off. Ideas?

02-26-2005, 07:08 PM	#2 (permalink)
clavus pow! Location: NorCal	Darken them. Light pushes things forward. Darkeness makes things receed. __________________ Ass, gas or grass. Nobody rides for free.

02-26-2005, 07:21 PM	#3 (permalink)
ngdawg peekaboo Location: on the back, bitch	duh..........thank you ,clavus! Anything else? Last edited by ngdawg; 02-26-2005 at 07:30 PM..

02-27-2005, 12:09 AM	#4 (permalink)
Konichiwaneko The Dreaded Pixel Nazi Location: Inside my camera	it needs a cat in it. __________________ Hesitate. Pull me in. Breath on breath. Skin on skin. Loving deep. Falling fast. All right here. Let this last. Here with our lips locked tight. Baby the time is right for us... to forget about us.

02-27-2005, 08:55 AM	#6 (permalink)
tecoyah Illusionary	Excellent work..... I recommend some shading of the skyline in back....and perhaps a reference item in front of the back buildings.....another trash can or something. __________________ Holding onto anger is like grasping a hot coal with the intent of throwing it at someone else; you are the one who gets burned. - Buddha

02-27-2005, 03:52 PM	#9 (permalink)
ngdawg peekaboo Location: on the back, bitch	another version-added a couple of things and darkened, shadowed and blended those back buildings a bit more

02-27-2005, 04:31 PM	#10 (permalink)
K-Wise It's All About The Ass!! Location: In a pool of mayonnaise!!	That looks really awesome ngdawg. Looks right out of a book illustration. I love it . Asta!! __________________ "I love music and it's my parents fault (closing statement)." - Me..quoting myself...from when I said that...On TFP..thats here...Tilted Forum Project *It ain't goodbye, it's see ya later! I'll miss you guys!* - Asta!!

02-28-2005, 12:04 PM	#11 (permalink)
vermin Indifferent to anti-matter Location: Tucson, AZ	That's really cool. I've tried some perspective stuff but never took it to your extreme of awesome-itivity. And I like the kitty in the lower right corner. __________________ If puns were sausages, this would be the wurst.

02-28-2005, 12:30 PM	#12 (permalink)
Lebell Cracking the Whip Location: Sexymama's arms...	There are details you can add to the top of the buildings that will help. Some I can think of would be chimneys, power/phone lines, water cisterns, roof access stairwells, and vent pipes. All would be visible to some degree over the roof line. Oh, and your sidewalk lines receeding would still be parallel to the curb line along the bottom. But seriously, that is a nice drawing. __________________ "Of all tyrannies, a tyranny exercised for the good of its victims may be the most oppressive. It may be better to live under robber barons than under omnipotent moral busybodies. The robber baron's cruelty may sometimes sleep, his cupidity may at some point be satiated; but those who torment us for our own good will torment us without end, for they do so with the approval of their own conscience." – C. S. Lewis The ONLY sponsors we have are YOU! Please Donate!

03-06-2005, 08:46 PM	#13 (permalink)
Hampshire Crazy	wow thats amazing. Looks like a comic book drawing. You should send them in to someone to see what they think. NIce work!