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Eowyn_Vala · 09-10-2003, 03:49 PM

the dark brings life
and day forbids it
silently hunting that crimson liquid
blackest heart acknowledge the screams
emanating the fright from ghostly features
death in waiting for life to extend
lonely the one is who hunts in such a manner
and destined to remain that way
for life given to sustain life is noble
taken without permission curses it
no end to torment brought on by attacker
victims- friend once before or foe
are seen the same-- as LIFE

Jaron · 09-10-2003, 04:39 PM

Wow... I'm tempted to ask your permission to use this poem as part of a play that I'm working on (perhaps in the last scene, as the last lines).

I like this poem alot, and it seems to echo something that I've been thinking as well - in a sense, human sacrifice, in that someone spills another person's blood for a more metaphysical reason... the purity and power contained within blood being incredible and immense by the mere fact that it can, and does, sustain life. Hell, even creating new life, in a sense.

In short, I like it. Alot.

fallen_angel · 09-10-2003, 05:20 PM

Oh my I think Im afraid to go to sleep tonight. . . hmm wait you go to bed before I do, so ha I Win!!! I really like this alot and it explains why you were so willing to listen to this music we are playing right now. Creepy

J.R.V.A. · 09-10-2003, 06:10 PM

Are you two poetic Twins? You both do such awesome work, and I thank you for giving me the chance to read it.

Eowyn_Vala · 09-23-2003, 09:50 AM

looking back on this the title seems a bit too much! Once agian thank you for all the complements. And J.R.V.A. thanks for comparing me to FA, she writes some deep things i often wish i could write!

it is good to know that some people like what I write even if it is a bit dark at times!

Stillborn · 09-23-2003, 12:03 PM

Both you and Fallen Angel are equals in my book. Both of you write in such a beautiful way, it makes me want to learn how you two do it! It sounds cheesy, but hell, it's true.

riptide4070 · 10-15-2003, 03:30 PM

dark but true, straight to the point

wonderful work!

09-10-2003, 03:49 PM	#1 (permalink)
Eowyn_Vala Insane Location: There's no place like home..	Life Taken the dark brings life and day forbids it silently hunting that crimson liquid blackest heart acknowledge the screams emanating the fright from ghostly features death in waiting for life to extend lonely the one is who hunts in such a manner and destined to remain that way for life given to sustain life is noble taken without permission curses it no end to torment brought on by attacker victims- friend once before or foe are seen the same-- as LIFE __________________ Cain: I know what you're doing. I've lead troops into battle before. DG: And, how am I doing? Cain: Well, there's less hugging when I do it Last edited by Eowyn_Vala; 09-10-2003 at 04:51 PM..

09-10-2003, 05:20 PM	#3 (permalink)
fallen_angel Psycho Location: Somewhere between the Havens and the Earth	Oh my I think Im afraid to go to sleep tonight. . . hmm wait you go to bed before I do, so ha I Win!!! I really like this alot and it explains why you were so willing to listen to this music we are playing right now. Creepy __________________ from the Havens I have fallen. . . to the earth as a mangled form. . . writhing in pain, my wings torn and bloodied. . . I have one purpose, only one goal. . . to find you and love you, for I am your. . . fallen angel

09-10-2003, 06:10 PM	#4 (permalink)
J.R.V.A. Junkie Location: Utah	Are you two poetic Twins? You both do such awesome work, and I thank you for giving me the chance to read it. __________________ And as she plays, her sweet song of laughter floats through the air and warms my heart

09-23-2003, 09:50 AM	#5 (permalink)
Eowyn_Vala Insane Location: There's no place like home..	looking back on this the title seems a bit too much! Once agian thank you for all the complements. And J.R.V.A. thanks for comparing me to FA, she writes some deep things i often wish i could write! it is good to know that some people like what I write even if it is a bit dark at times! __________________ Cain: I know what you're doing. I've lead troops into battle before. DG: And, how am I doing? Cain: Well, there's less hugging when I do it

09-23-2003, 12:03 PM	#6 (permalink)
Stillborn Tilted Location: Dingden, DE / Centennial, CO	Both you and Fallen Angel are equals in my book. Both of you write in such a beautiful way, it makes me want to learn how you two do it! It sounds cheesy, but hell, it's true. __________________ Waiting... to be born again Wanting... the saddest kind of pain Waiting for the day when I will crawl away

09-10-2003, 04:39 PM	#2 (permalink)
Jaron Crazy Location: Hong Kong.	Wow... I'm tempted to ask your permission to use this poem as part of a play that I'm working on (perhaps in the last scene, as the last lines). I like this poem alot, and it seems to echo something that I've been thinking as well - in a sense, human sacrifice, in that someone spills another person's blood for a more metaphysical reason... the purity and power contained within blood being incredible and immense by the mere fact that it can, and does, sustain life. Hell, even creating new life, in a sense. In short, I like it. Alot.

10-15-2003, 03:30 PM	#7 (permalink)
riptide4070 Addict Location: Boone, NC	dark but true, straight to the point wonderful work! __________________ "the greatest trick the devil ever pulled, was making the world believe he didn't exist" -Kevin Spacey 'The Usual Suspects'