virgin

Hello All

My wife has been away in europe for almost three weeks and will be coming home soon. I need some help, possibly a feminine opinion of how to write an erotic letter. The points I would like to include are I want to undress her, put her hands above her head, lick her cunt, have her suck my cock, and bend her over and spread her ass cheeks apart and fuck her long and strong. See what I mean , I have the mechanics down of what I want to say and do, but I need your skills of how to express it. If you are going to write an example for me, start it Dear Pretty Lady.

Be as graphic or romantic as you like

Thanks for your help

Jeff

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tuner

With a nickname like "virgin", I really suspect that you're trying to get us to write some erotica for you ;-)

abaya

It's all about DETAILS. Write a whole paragraph or two about each of those points that you want to include. Use all of your senses to describe everything you remember about being with her sexually... and of course, it's very helpful to include how she makes you feel inside (emotionally), as for many women there's no line between emotional/mental/sexual stimulation.

My quiet bf went out on a limb last summer and wrote me the hottest erotic e-mail when we were apart for a couple of weeks... it was all about what he intended to do to me the next time he saw me, from first kisses to orgasm and beyond. It was fantastic. I printed it out and stuck it in my journal, to read and drool on from time to time.

If you're lucky, OneSnowyOwl will make an appearance and drop a sample line or two... she's pretty amazing with the erotic writing.

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JamesB

Instead of focusing on what you want her do to you - make it entirely about HER. I think you will get better 'results' that way .

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skier

I think it would add a lot of originality to your letter to add a theme. As well as tying your story together, it'll make it memorable.

Nobody would forget about an erotic letter with a pirate theme.

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snowy

Aww...thank you, I'm touched, I truly am.

I recently began writing erotic works and I can say from the feedback I've received that 1) you want detail, but not TOO much (not the REAL nitty-gritty), 2) use the vernacular words to describe body parts (tits, cock, ass, etc.--anything else just sounds weird, in my opinion), and 3) personalize it. Focus on feeling. How would it feel to actually be in those positions?

It means more if it comes from you. I can give you pointers, I can proofread, I can help you spice it up. But if she knows YOU wrote it yourself...that's more powerful than the words themselves.

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MooseMan3000

Maybe it's just me, but I don't feel that "lick her cunt, have her suck my cock, and bend her over and spread her ass cheeks apart and fuck her long and strong," really fits in a letter that I would call "erotic." If you're going for "pornographic," then by all means. If you want erotic, however, you have to use euphamisms.

"I would indulge myself of the sinful pleasures of your quivering mound, filling your womanly self with my oral love tool."
"You would then be allowed - briefly, of course - to sate your burning desire to coddle my throbbing manmeat in your heavenly portal."

...

Well, maybe not exactly like that. But I would still shy away from "I want to fuck you so hard, baby."

abaya

I dunno MooseMan, I'd almost prefer the honesty of the last sentence you wrote, since I loooooooove it when my bf unapologetically states that he is dying to fuck me. Not to say that I don't swoon over genuine erotic language, but your earlier sentences sorta make me smile more than get turned on... (no offense, since it sounds like you already know they're a little over the top).

But yeah, I agree that there is a fine line between erotic and pornographic... virgin, in your "lick her cunt..." etc statements, the focus seems to be on you. This isn't bad; believe me, she WANTS to know how badly you want to fuck her and no one else, how you've been thinking about nothing else since she's been gone. That will turn her on. But focus on how SHE would feel in response to your body, and communicate your sheer lust to her and try to anticipate her needs while reading the letter. She'll long for you to say certain things, just as with sex she longs for you to touch certain parts of her. And if she's your wife, I'm sure by now you know what those things are!! Hit all the right verbal buttons, man!

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virgin

Really, I am at a loss of how to do this, I never have before.
I am not going to publish this, I will personalize it, and the heaving mounds, kind of stuff just makes me laugh too. Does anybody have a dirty letter in them that I can personalize for my own occasion that they are willing to share.

Jeff

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blonde_guild

I'm agreeing with most of what abaya is saying- it's all in the details. I had to learn how to talk erotically/dirtily over the phone, when my girlfriend and I were separated, owing to going to colleges in different time zones. At first it felt kind of dumb, trying to describe what I wanted to do to her, but quickly we both got into it. My favorite part is describing foreplay and undressing her. To be effective, you need to think about a sexual experience with her that you really enjoyed, and then maybe break it down and note why it was so good. Was it when you teased the edge of her panties and slid a finger underneath? Did you attack her with ferocity and feel the muscles in her legs and body strain against you? Chances are that she enjoyed the things you did and do to her. So focus on those actions, and try to describe them with more than just action verbs. 'Lick' is good, but adverbs to accentuate the motion will add a lot. Like abaya said also, keep the focus on her enjoyment- after all, you're writing TO her, so tell her why SHE will like it. One final thought, I think the line between erotic and pornographic blurs the further you get into it. So in the beginning, there's lots of descriptions and teasing and getting her aroused, and as you move forward in your evil plot, the action can get more and more explicit, til you're straight-up slamming her cunt. Anyway, my two cents.

By the way abaya, good song for a signature.

abaya

Thanks blonde!!

And no virgin, we won't let you plagiarize our dirty letters!! Write your own, man, it will mean sooooo much more. Using someone else's dirty letters is like buying cubic zirconia...

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bubonico

Virgin- I'm currently half a world away from my gf and have had to write a few of these letters myself. Writing things like that can seem hard at first. It's actually pretty fun once you get used to it though. My main suggestion would be to just give it a shot. Being married to this gal and all I'd say that you know what your wife likes. I imagine if you just put some effort into it no matter what you say it'll have the effect you desire. I have to agree with everybody that getting a template of sorts from somebody then personalizing it isn't really the way to go. She may not notice if you do that, but that's not the point. You should try to write a letter in your own voice. I mean like using language in your letter that you normall use in your speech, I dunno how you talk but if you say the little things that she knows you normally say then that will make it seam a lot more personal. She'll eat that shit up man trust me.

Cimarron29414

1) Setting: Where would it happen? What time of day? Who is there? What are the smells, lighting, furniture?

2) You: What are you wearing? Where are you sitting/standing? How would you approach her?

3) Her: What is she wearing? How does she smell? What is her hairstyle?

4) Misc: Who is dominant? Are others watching now? Is there risk involved?

etc. etc.

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HiWayMan

Read Penthouse Forum letters to get ideas.

snowy

That's both a good and bad idea--there are some REALLY cheesy letters in there (I read them regularly). I would actually recommend reading the top-rated erotic stories over at Literotica.com over the Penthouse letters. Much less cheese.

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