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05-04-2003, 05:39 PM
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Think about it
Location: North Carolina
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Mother Earth
When Mother Earth had given birth
She looked at us and saw our worth She gave us all the stars above Along with truth, hope, faith, and love And when our lives to these are tied Our Mother Earth is filled with pride So live your lives the very best And from the Mother you'll be blessed I wrote this as I was driving to my cousins wedding yesterday. I think I'll mail this to her as a second present.
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05-07-2003, 07:03 PM
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Naughty Just Right
Location: Euphoria
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She will absolutely cherish it I am sure.
I hope you will tell her when you wrote it. That will add so much more meaning to it for her. Nice peaceful work.
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05-09-2003, 05:08 PM
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Insane
Location: There's no place like home..
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That was beautiful. I personally don't write peoms that rhyme, but this is perfect. It is something that no matter who reads it, where they are, or how they are feeling that they have to feel at least some hope. I am a firm believer that there should always be hope and that is what your writing seems to mean to me.
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