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starlite · 05-06-2003, 01:39 PM

On the inside Im hurting
Confused, Used
On the outside Im Laughing
Happy, Amused
On the inside I cry
I long to be loved
On the outside Im smiling
Confiedent, unmoved
On the inside Im different
Than I appear on the out
And that is jsut me
On the Inside and Out

little limey · 05-06-2003, 05:14 PM

I like this line:

On the inside Im different
Than I appear on the out

It's a nice change from saying "outside" and the reader knows what you mean.

riptide4070 · 05-07-2003, 06:02 PM

I know the feeling. Starting a new job or moving some place new helps to raise my self esteem. Just trying to help.

Angel · 05-07-2003, 06:07 PM

Wow! Powerful message.
The mask of life...

Eowyn_Vala · 05-09-2003, 05:04 PM

I feel like I've read this before but I know that I haven't. I really like it. It is very expressive in a way that most people don't even think about. You have talent with words whether you want to believe me or not!

05-06-2003, 01:39 PM	#1 (permalink)
starlite Upright Location: Kansas	Inside and Out On the inside Im hurting Confused, Used On the outside Im Laughing Happy, Amused On the inside I cry I long to be loved On the outside Im smiling Confiedent, unmoved On the inside Im different Than I appear on the out And that is jsut me On the Inside and Out __________________ I try to write my feelings so I will right now. . . I only post to get feed back. I think its a little rude when you read and dont even bother to make a little comment. Please do because this helps me a great deal. Thank you ~Sarah~

05-07-2003, 06:02 PM	#3 (permalink)
riptide4070 Addict Location: Boone, NC	I know the feeling. Starting a new job or moving some place new helps to raise my self esteem. Just trying to help. __________________ "the greatest trick the devil ever pulled, was making the world believe he didn't exist" -Kevin Spacey 'The Usual Suspects'

05-07-2003, 06:07 PM	#4 (permalink)
Angel Naughty Just Right Location: Euphoria	Wow! Powerful message. The mask of life... __________________ In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer. ~Albert Camus

05-09-2003, 05:04 PM	#5 (permalink)
Eowyn_Vala Insane Location: There's no place like home..	I feel like I've read this before but I know that I haven't. I really like it. It is very expressive in a way that most people don't even think about. You have talent with words whether you want to believe me or not! __________________ Cain: I know what you're doing. I've lead troops into battle before. DG: And, how am I doing? Cain: Well, there's less hugging when I do it

05-06-2003, 05:14 PM	#2 (permalink)
little limey Psycho Location: Room Nineteen	I like this line: On the inside Im different Than I appear on the out It's a nice change from saying "outside" and the reader knows what you mean.