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Cute lil' couplets for my sister
My oldest sister Mikie has a lot of dreams. She's sorta like me as I was a few months ago - stuck in a rut with too many obligations tying her in one place. She wants really badly to become a graphic designer. This year for Christmas, I sorta broke my budget a little for her... 'cause I wanna see her succeed. I got her a graphics tablet for her computer... something she can use to get to the next level of graphic design, and probably the last thing she'd ever expect.
I figured I'd write a little poem to her for her to read before she opens it up, but I couldn't think of anything besides rhyming couplets. I really detest rhyming couplets. Anyways, I wrote it ... and here it is. Bear with me now I'm used to free verse because poems in couplets always sound terse My dear sister Mikie I hope you approve Because writing these rhymes Is cramping my groove I got you a present that I know you'll enjoy You could not predict it it's yours to employ It's perfect for you and you'll see what's implied when you tear off the wrapping and stare starry-eyed To art and to freedom To future without doubt C'mon, rip off the paper and freak the hell out... |
I like it. I'm sure it, as well as the present, will bring a smile to her face.
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^ Ditto. It's got humor. I think she'll like it...and when she opens the gift she'll like it even more.
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Replace the word "without" with "not" and it flows better. Nice touch Hal. :) Mr Mephisto |
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