Seer666

Well, seeing as I've gotten some good responses off the last one, let's try another, all be it a short one.


There’s no emotion I can not hide
With my darkened soul and bitter pride
And though all you see is Mr. Hyde
Dr. Jeckell is crying inside

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Bad spellers of the world untie!!!

I am the one you warned me of

I seem to have misplaced the bullet with your name on it, but I have a whole box addressed to occupant.

vonstalhein

I like the sentiment. Fresh, original, profund some might say. Personally, i think 'very good' will suffice.

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Seer666

Thank you. Always nice to hear good things about your work. Course, I would even be happy with an "It sucks", as long as it was heart felt.

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Bad spellers of the world untie!!!

I am the one you warned me of

I seem to have misplaced the bullet with your name on it, but I have a whole box addressed to occupant.

saut

I like it. A lot. I think it's one of the better short poems I've seen here.

Seer666

Thankiee

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Bad spellers of the world untie!!!

I am the one you warned me of

I seem to have misplaced the bullet with your name on it, but I have a whole box addressed to occupant.

ForgottenKnight

Very good!

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fallenangel

fab, my first visit to this forum and i read this, i'm pleased, oh i'll be back, maybe i'll even post once in a while too *ponders out loud*

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all I wanna do is - give the best of me to you

Seer666

bump. hehehehe

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Bad spellers of the world untie!!!

I am the one you warned me of

I seem to have misplaced the bullet with your name on it, but I have a whole box addressed to occupant.

tecoyah

Good write......enjoy the mental images,well done

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Holding onto anger is like grasping a hot coal with the intent of throwing it at someone else; you are the one who gets burned. - Buddha