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Seer666 · 03-24-2004, 12:19 AM

Well, seeing as I've gotten some good responses off the last one, let's try another, all be it a short one.

There’s no emotion I can not hide
With my darkened soul and bitter pride
And though all you see is Mr. Hyde
Dr. Jeckell is crying inside

vonstalhein · 03-26-2004, 02:33 PM

I like the sentiment. Fresh, original, profund some might say. Personally, i think 'very good' will suffice.

Seer666 · 03-27-2004, 08:11 PM

Thank you. Always nice to hear good things about your work. Course, I would even be happy with an "It sucks", as long as it was heart felt.

saut · 03-30-2004, 06:00 PM

I like it. A lot. I think it's one of the better short poems I've seen here.

Seer666 · 04-01-2004, 12:34 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by saut
I like it. A lot. I think it's one of the better short poems I've seen here.

Thankiee

ForgottenKnight · 04-04-2004, 12:56 PM

Very good!

fallenangel · 04-09-2004, 01:04 AM

fab, my first visit to this forum and i read this, i'm pleased, oh i'll be back, maybe i'll even post once in a while too *ponders out loud*

Seer666 · 05-26-2004, 07:39 PM

bump. hehehehe

tecoyah · 05-27-2004, 04:38 AM

Good write......enjoy the mental images,well done

03-24-2004, 12:19 AM	#1 (permalink)
Seer666 Oh dear God he breeded Location: Arizona	A Monster's Tears Well, seeing as I've gotten some good responses off the last one, let's try another, all be it a short one. There’s no emotion I can not hide With my darkened soul and bitter pride And though all you see is Mr. Hyde Dr. Jeckell is crying inside __________________ Bad spellers of the world untie!!! I am the one you warned me of I seem to have misplaced the bullet with your name on it, but I have a whole box addressed to occupant.

03-26-2004, 02:33 PM	#2 (permalink)
vonstalhein Insane Location: Where You Live.	I like the sentiment. Fresh, original, profund some might say. Personally, i think 'very good' will suffice. __________________ No Win No Fee

03-27-2004, 08:11 PM	#3 (permalink)
Seer666 Oh dear God he breeded Location: Arizona	Thank you. Always nice to hear good things about your work. Course, I would even be happy with an "It sucks", as long as it was heart felt. __________________ Bad spellers of the world untie!!! I am the one you warned me of I seem to have misplaced the bullet with your name on it, but I have a whole box addressed to occupant.

04-04-2004, 12:56 PM	#6 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	Very good! __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?"

04-09-2004, 01:04 AM	#7 (permalink)
fallenangel soaring Location: near the water	fab, my first visit to this forum and i read this, i'm pleased, oh i'll be back, maybe i'll even post once in a while too ponders out loud __________________ all I wanna do is - give the best of me to you

03-30-2004, 06:00 PM	#4 (permalink)
saut Registered User Location: Pittsburgh	I like it. A lot. I think it's one of the better short poems I've seen here.

05-26-2004, 07:39 PM	#8 (permalink)
Seer666 Oh dear God he breeded Location: Arizona	bump. hehehehe __________________ Bad spellers of the world untie!!! I am the one you warned me of I seem to have misplaced the bullet with your name on it, but I have a whole box addressed to occupant.

05-27-2004, 04:38 AM	#9 (permalink)
tecoyah Illusionary	Good write......enjoy the mental images,well done __________________ Holding onto anger is like grasping a hot coal with the intent of throwing it at someone else; you are the one who gets burned. - Buddha