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A Monster's Tears
Well, seeing as I've gotten some good responses off the last one, let's try another, all be it a short one.
There’s no emotion I can not hide With my darkened soul and bitter pride And though all you see is Mr. Hyde Dr. Jeckell is crying inside |
I like the sentiment. Fresh, original, profund some might say. Personally, i think 'very good' will suffice.
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Thank you. Always nice to hear good things about your work. Course, I would even be happy with an "It sucks", as long as it was heart felt.
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I like it. A lot. I think it's one of the better short poems I've seen here.
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Very good!
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fab, my first visit to this forum and i read this, i'm pleased, oh i'll be back, maybe i'll even post once in a while too *ponders out loud*
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bump. hehehehe
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Good write......enjoy the mental images,well done
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