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Lassus · 02-22-2004, 11:18 PM

Curse

The snow blows out over a dark and dead city
And here dwell the Ghosts and Demons of Man
Walk along the streets and snow so grity
And still some fight, because they can

Look out and see all of it, the greif
the sorrow, the pain, the torn
Stand here looking at a fallen and brown leaf
All shall die as sure as they are born

The wind comes up bringing the chill
Everywere I see death,horrer, and decay
Look to my pocket and reach for a pill
may it be enough for sleep I say

Eyes wide look at me in suprise
Go ahead look at me in shock
I wish i never saw the sunrise
Insane is me so bring on your lock

Bring thoes chains they cant be worse
than thoes of a mind shattered
Born crazy, born smart, this is my curse
and it is my soul that this life has battered

oct 27 2002

-Sean Caldwell

losthellhound · 03-10-2004, 06:23 PM

wow, very well done indeed. I havent seen a poem tackle this subject, and you've done it very well. Thank you

Lassus · 03-10-2004, 06:54 PM

ahah thx but with writeing I figure I might as well tackle what I know

scarebearjinx · 03-13-2004, 12:45 AM

wow. that kinda touched me. it was beautiful.

Lassus · 03-13-2004, 12:50 AM

thank you <never thought one o my more down poems will get called beautiful>

02-22-2004, 11:18 PM	#1 (permalink)
Lassus Addict Location: Canada and I love it here	My Insanity Poem #2 Curse The snow blows out over a dark and dead city And here dwell the Ghosts and Demons of Man Walk along the streets and snow so grity And still some fight, because they can Look out and see all of it, the greif the sorrow, the pain, the torn Stand here looking at a fallen and brown leaf All shall die as sure as they are born The wind comes up bringing the chill Everywere I see death,horrer, and decay Look to my pocket and reach for a pill may it be enough for sleep I say Eyes wide look at me in suprise Go ahead look at me in shock I wish i never saw the sunrise Insane is me so bring on your lock Bring thoes chains they cant be worse than thoes of a mind shattered Born crazy, born smart, this is my curse and it is my soul that this life has battered oct 27 2002 -Sean Caldwell __________________ Beauty can be found in the darkest day and on the darkest hour and even in the darkest mind

03-10-2004, 06:23 PM	#2 (permalink)
losthellhound Thats MR. Muffin Face now Location: Everywhere work sends me	wow, very well done indeed. I havent seen a poem tackle this subject, and you've done it very well. Thank you __________________ "Life is possible only with illusions. And so, the question for the science of mental health must become an absolutely new and revolutionary one, yet one that reflects the essence of the human condition: On what level of illusion does one live?" -- Ernest Becker, The Denial of Death

03-10-2004, 06:54 PM	#3 (permalink)
Lassus Addict Location: Canada and I love it here	ahah thx but with writeing I figure I might as well tackle what I know __________________ Beauty can be found in the darkest day and on the darkest hour and even in the darkest mind

03-13-2004, 12:50 AM	#5 (permalink)
Lassus Addict Location: Canada and I love it here	thank you <never thought one o my more down poems will get called beautiful> __________________ Beauty can be found in the darkest day and on the darkest hour and even in the darkest mind

03-13-2004, 12:45 AM	#4 (permalink)
scarebearjinx Psycho Location: in a deep, dark hole where rainbow creatures attack me to eat my fingernails.	wow. that kinda touched me. it was beautiful.