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Old 12-02-2003, 08:27 PM   #1 (permalink)
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What Have I Done? Part 2: The High Price

Part Two:

What Have I Done?

A Sacrificed Friendship

A Passed Up Oppotrunity

A high price to pay indeed
One would think for this price
I recieved the greatest of products
One would be wrong
For this high price I pay
Heartache is bestowed upon me
Churning pains in my stomach
Tears welling in my eyes
Only a maniac would pay
For this sad, sorrowful product

Miles Traveled

Hundreds spent

Yet another high price to pay
Again one would think
I recieved the greatest of products
Once again, One would be wrong
I sacrificed my world
Offered my everything
For the same, sad product
As only a maniac would

I cannot undo what has been done
I cannot change what fate has willed for me


That be part 2 of my heartache. 1 and 3 are floating around somewheres
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Old 12-05-2003, 05:45 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I feel the same way, good poetry and release
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Old 12-18-2003, 06:36 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Nice stuff again, please post more Thanks
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